I'm gonna view this with a few different aspects; Accuracy, Creativity, Detail, and Portrayal/Pose. First, The hair is great! And it's interesting how you made the hair closest to your head with more volume. I LOVE the choker and head piece. Though honestly I remember it being bigger. The cloth used for the pants is just see-through enough to give that wispy and pure look Talim gives. I love the design of the belt. The buckle is very pretty with it's detail. The wrap on your chest has an awesome trim on it. It looks exactly like the one from the game. The only thing would be picky with are the tonfa blades. Since this is a game about swords you cannot forget that the weapons define the character. So it's really crucial to make them as exact as possible. Unfortunatly it doesn't look like any familiar ones she's had before. Lastly, Your pose really shows how curvy and fit you are! xD It also doesn't hurt that you look pretty. I like how you look like you're getting ready to finish an opponent off. It makes Talim look like a fighter that will not take your bullshit. lol Whoever took the photo did a great job aswell! The lighting is awesome. Sorry if this one is too long, but I enjoyed writing it!